Thesis statement for Final analysis activity 1

Olympics sports, a sports company, clothing brands, and African countries play a huge role in HIV AID’s epidemic.

What sports group and communities help in Aid’s epidemic?

Education programs in the schools to support the aid’s epidemic?

Activities and sports events done to address the problems?

what streetwear have culture brands done for the aid’s epidemic community?

how does shoe culture provide an impact on aid’s epidemic?



Midway Class Results Questions


What should I focus on in order to get at least a b+ in the class with all the work I’m doing lately? Which area should I put more effort in?

How do your comments impact on my future writing and able to use them beyond this course.? Does it show weakness for the audiences that read it?

Peer Website 

Why did MJ choose this picture of the background?

Did it related to the aid’s subject were researching about?

Personal Goals 

Improve on writing for a certain type of audience to clearly understand what I am trying to say.

Able to use the experience or knowledge obtain and used it for my future career.

Master the art of thinking and seeing things differently includes deeper thinking, coming up with questions to  promote further research, and coming up with solutions.



Creating Research questions

Activity 2 research questions


1. What is the significance of Robert Wanes Myers background with music has a role in his life?

2.  What is the connection of the image of the rabbit and carrot with Jimmy Finley culture and life experience?

3.  What does the “rose e. 234“ symbolize mean broadly culturally?

4. What do the black and pink color on Robert Wayne relate to his personal life?

In depth thoughts of Secondary Qulit research 2/8


Activity 1


Why didn’t he affiliated with Nike and other Alethic questions companies to show the world about gay rights combing equality

Who is Dr Tom Waddell  how he was affiliated with the Olympics

Why he chose the logo colors yellow and blue?

how did aids extensively impacted the Olympic community during the late 1980’s?

In what way did aids hiv affected Olympics?


Description of Flickr Rate Schedule Sign

Objective Description



The photo is black and white (grey scale ) it has no bright color

The picture is slanted

The lady is giving a dumb look and she seems to be angry

The rate schedule answers is 1, answers require thought is 2, correct answers is 4 dumb looks is free

This a coffee shop

The top cups are stacked up on the  counter

There’s a description saying this is not burger king you don’t get it your way

The lady has long hair

Good coffee sign

The lady appears to have long hair

There is a sign that said “good coffee cheaper than Prozac

The lady has very dark roots but on top, the long strands on are very long blond

The ratings of this establishment are B 89.

Besides the lady is being in the photo there are several signs in the background.



Class Notes 2/1

Primary source

Original sources first hand  ,data authors generate themselves ( also newspaper be  primary source  doing the interview )(also called original source or evidence) is an artifact, a document, diary, manuscript, autobiography, a recording, or any other source of information that was created at the time under study.

Secondary source

Reporting someone’s point of view about data already generated. Also information is one that was created later by someone who did not experience first-hand or participate in the events or conditions you’re researching.

Comparison describing and naming something

physical attribute of thing that and naming something( identify its relationship with other things)

Describing picture- its stating the facts opening alot of detail

Objective ( what’s there)

Subjective ( making inferences and jump to conclusion reading the image)using languge it appears that , it looks like , it seems,This build ethos

  • put subjective in your annotation
  • draw connections that connect to your memories from annotation

Conventions of the Book & Blog Genere

The difference between the Haltman text and Zevaillos text


Haltman  text

  • Grey / white
  • Font Blocky “official”
  • Subtitles
  • Authors
  • Lots of spacing
  • Publisher info (down at the bottom)
  • List –
  • Different italic fronts
  • Title
  • Subtitle
  • Wall of text
  • Dark color scheme
  • Lots of other authors, not just one
  • Chapter name on each page
  • For intended audience


  • Author presents
  • Image
  • Links –rhetorical
  • Constantly updated
  • “whimsical “ font
  • Colorful
  • Pages/ menus
  • Lost
  • Small text
  • Tweets
  • Has many subjects
  • Tags of continue reading
  • Title has black/ white different color scheme
  • Font- has different type of bubble letters
  • Posted date on the top
  • Shape logos different sizes
  • Engage with readers
  • Color of the webpage is bright (attention getter )
  • Other social media icons